Puerto Rico on my dad's side
Ohio on my mothers
Together, they had three kids
My sister, me, and my brother
I have quite a few friends
And they're all real pals
But sometimes, I worry
Most my friends are gals
But not in a romantic manner
That would just be weird
I just can't imagine
I would feel quite queer
I like to play video games
From Super Smash to CoD
But when it comes to Rock Band
Can't touch me, I'm God
I also love my music
Abandoning Sunday is the best
They just put out a new album
Go ahead, put it to the test
Because the movie Nacho Libre
My parents call me Lucho
I guess that it's alright
Except for that freshman they call Chucho
He can be pretty obnoxious
When he's shouting really loud
And when we get off the bus
Roaring like a lion
Roaring like a lion
He'll just push right through the crowd
But I guess that it's just the freshman
They're probably all the same
All from the south side
Of obnoxious, loud Lorain
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It was funny, but good.
ReplyDeleteOne of the only poems I actually found hilarious! You could easily make this a song and give it to Eminem. Lol!
ReplyDeleteThis is the best poem so far. The way you rhymed stood out for me. You did such an amazing job.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was great! I really wish I could write this good.
ReplyDeleteOmg Luis, your blogs are so funny. I like the ways you rhymed and how you had a sense of humor in it.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you incorporated yourself and your likes into your poem. I feel like I know pretty much everything about you. It was really good!
ReplyDeleteLuis,
ReplyDeleteYou have a fantastic rhyme scheme. Very creative and engaging! Also, I love the reference to Naco Libre.
Luis I loved your poem. It was funny and it rhymed and even if your friends are gals at least I'm one of them. Good job.
ReplyDeleteLuis, after reading this poem I no longer see you as Luis. I see you as LUIS.
ReplyDeleteYour post was very funny other than the borderline. I like how you incorporated a lot of things, including your friends, family, or you.
ReplyDeleteThis is so great. I'm sorry you won't get the cat. Actually, I'm not, cats are gods. I am also a god. I get cats. Anyway, really good poem, I'm sad you didn't spit out sick rhymes, bro.
ReplyDeleteI admire how you incorporated so many details about yourself and what you like to do. The overall poem I just adore. I am happy to one of your friends that are gals but not in the romantic manner.
ReplyDeleteYour rhyme scheme is really good. I loved your poem. It was hilarious.
ReplyDeleteThis poem was really good. I wish I could write poems like this but I can not. I like how you rhymed in this poem. I also liked how you you compared a lot of things.
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote about how you were nicknamed after Nacho Libre and it's a great movie
ReplyDeleteYour humor in this poem reflects the humor you have in your personality. Everything you do is always amusing. And don't worry that most of your friends are gals....cuz I'm one of them.
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